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My Hero Comic Cover by Slasher12 My Hero Comic Cover by Slasher12

It doesn't have a logo on it but I'm going to keep it like this with out it for now at lest until I can make one.

Tools used:

Sketch Book
Alvin Draft/Tec Retrac Mechanical Pencil 0.7mm/blue barrel with HB lead
Eraser
Copic Markers: Black
Markerpaper
Lightpad
Pentel Pocket Brush Pen
Faber-Castell artist pen S, F
VuPointSolution Magic Wand Scanner
Artrage 3


This is a comic book cover I was working is for this story outline concept I did a while back.

"My Hero"
Summery: After Mortimer pushes Clara Cluck out of the way of a falling piano, she becomes so grateful that he saved her life that she proceeds to following him around not giving him a moments rest or privacy. Now all Mortimer wants is for her to leave him alone.

The characters the would be in this is;

Mortimer Mouse

Clara Cluck

Horace Horsecollar

Clarabelle Cow

Mickey Mouse

Minnie Mouse

Goofy

Donald Duck

Daisy Duck

This is from here: slasher12.deviantart.com/art/D…

Art© Kim C. Jones

Character © Disney

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illeity Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014   Digital Artist
Good day! You asked me to provide a comment on your work. I hope you take whatever can help you become a better artist.

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>Solid composition. It falls within a third in the Rule of Thirds and thus the eyes fall comfortable on the duo.
>A graceful line of action. You can trace a smooth curve from Clara's elbow up to her shoulder, then around to her hat feather. Good work!
>Colors and shading are good, if a bit too soft. Remember that certain regions were meant to have hard shadows; it helps develop the depth of the subject.

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>Line weights are uneven. We go from thick lines to thin lines to not only create expression in a work, but also to indicate light direction. For example, Clara's left fingers are solidly drawn, but the lines on her beak and hat feather are uneven, if a little unsure of itself.
>Mortimer is oddly flat. While Clara had a lot of expression from the line weights, Mortimer's face seems entirely composed of thin lines. It makes him stand out, but in an unnatural manner.

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>Buying a single issue from the professional comics can already give you a class on line weights that will aid you in inking. Pay attention to how they ink dark regions and clothing, furniture etc. (Or you can search the net or here on DA for free :) )
>As for shading, a single episode of any anime or cartoon can help with that :) It's all about observation :)
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HermesSquirrel Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They both look so adorable here. :heart: Oh poor Mortimer. :giggle:
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MyC-chan Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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THe artwork is very nice, it is drawn in a typical cartoon style and as far as i can judge i think you draw the characters very well and set them in a fitting scene. The colouring is simple but fits the overall style.
The signature is placed well,especially important because it is so long. The only thing that i dislike is the background colour. 
Of course pink is sweet and with the gradient it gives it a nice scent ,however with the pink feather and the violet hat i believe a blue or perhaps slightly orange/yellow tone would have been more fitting and would not make the feather melt with the background as much.

Overall a nice piece it looks like a good piece of fanart and i could imagine it being sold as print for cards or other similar occasions therefore well done with this one. 

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Slasher12 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013   Filmographer
Thanks for the feed back.
I'll try the color tones you said and see what happens:)
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Kartoon-Kompany Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013   General Artist
I hope you follow up on this! I love your Mortimer art!
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ashbasher22 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
::aww: this is really sweet. Love the expressions and art. :)
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AlexRaccoonGlider Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG you did Clara Cluck? I always liked her character design and personality ^_^

I would so watch this if this was an animated show =3 Keep up the cool work!
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DCLeadboot Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh, heh... that's rather sweet, really... and very funny! :XD:
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Brainstormer623 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Weird, the girl is the farm fowl and yet Mortimer is the one who's a chicken. :trollface:
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Slasher12 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013   Filmographer
lol
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